Draft Vs. Final Draft (Academic Summary)

The rough draft had no thesis statement, or any organization. I had to go more into details about each subject. For the rough draft, I just threw the articles in a sloppy paragraph and combined all the paragraphs. I took the rough draft to a friend and she proof read my paper. There were numerous comments and strike outs everywhere. On of the paragraphs I didnt even tell when it was published and what the article was about. There was alot of editing, but worth it at the end.